村行逢少時同窗遂至其家置酒(改成古风)

无稽斋主

<span><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt;"><font size="4"><span>村行逢少時同窗遂至其家置酒<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span>四月一日<p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">故人欣我至，爲我舉行觴。但得歡時醉，休言別後傷。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">溪前柳飄搖，庭外燕飛翔。節物麗春野，坐看翠色蒼。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">送窮既無術，守素又何妨。解得老莊意，江湖便相忘。</font></span></p></span>

浔阳倦客

两shang音读不舒服；7句这么拗哈

无稽斋主

回倦客兄,前两韵音同,并无大碍.七句也是合律的哈.

草啸

<p>伤字略感牵强，三联也觉凑泊。</p>

红叶

<p>三联估计有引出老庄的作用？</p><p>7句只是小拗，若非要救的话，对句便改真行否？</p>

无稽斋主

<p>草啸兄意见,愿闻其详.</p><p>三联是眼前之景,也有那么一点红叶兄所言意思.七句可救可不救.</p>

无稽斋主

<p>此作近古风,遂改作成古风.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt;"><span><font size="4">村行逢少時同窗遂至其家置酒<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span>四月一日<p></p></font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">故人欣我至，爲我舉行觴。但得歡時醉，休言別後傷。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">溪前柳飄搖，庭外燕飛翔。節物麗春野，坐看翠色蒼。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">送窮既無術，守素又何妨。解得老莊意，江湖便相忘。</font></span></p>