再作辭春賦

一得愚生

<p>底事傷懷不穩眠？人間三月有餘妍。<br/>臨池碧柳柔堪弄，露角清荷細可憐。<br/>尋夢倘能同此夜，摘香何必待明年。<br/>吾儕半是多情種，浪把韶光付鄭箋。</p>

鄱湖渔歌

<span id="ctl00_MasterContentPlaceHolder_TitleLabel" title="多情未必不丈夫--与《〈背影〉里的&quot;背影&quot;解读》的作者商榷">多情未必不丈夫</span>

燕山燕

<p>先生诗总是章法严谨.</p><p>一句起问,二句作答,三、四句具体解二句，皆是三月余妍。五、六句则承一句，又启出七、八句，多情处正在五、六，因而“傷懷不穩眠”。</p><p>淡淡伤春之情，从容写来，或有所托。</p><p></p>

门前五柳

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman';">尋夢倘能同此夜，摘香何必待明年。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman';">吾儕半是多情種，滿腹牢騷托鄭箋。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman';"></span>&nbsp;</p>[em17]赞叹再三,学习中......

草啸

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">尋夢倘能同此夜，摘香何必待明年。</span><span lang="EN-US"><br/>略觉气韵稍弱。</span></p>

二十八刀

<font face="宋体">步兄一个——<br/><br/>满目残花共雨眠，尘埃落去一媸妍。<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">山山碧郁知侬所，岁岁文章是客怜。</span></font><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">故国春深曾久恨，卷帘人瘦亦千年。而今</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">万里新天阔，当取白云为画笺。</span></p>