赏莲、次铜人像兄韵

依竹品梅

<p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">素心凝碧卧清池，惯向和风挺玉姿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">南浦云残情未尽，菱歌曲散力难支。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">常携锦浪分天镜，偶侣雨声题壁诗。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">万顷凌波驰远目，红衣初浴正当时。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">修改：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">素心凝碧卧清池，惯向熏风挺玉姿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">南浦云残情未尽，菱歌曲散力难支。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">每携锦浪分天镜，偶共雨声题壁诗。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">万顷凌波驰远目，红衣初浴正当时。</span></p><p></p>

江湖小李

中两联确是费了不少心机!

鄱湖渔歌

品梅这首不错,<font face="宋体" size="3">常可否改每字?</font>

依竹品梅

谢谢小李兄和渔哥兄。修改一稿。：）

鄱湖渔歌

修改稿好.