五月作业之一：五律：默默祝师父生日快乐

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p></p></span><p></p><p></p><p></p>不行，我得从改改，好多处出律了。<br/>

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<p>你想看出律的么？哼！您瞧：</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">随师学格律，几载歪诗园？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">网上无年月，诗中有轮番。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">"颈联不可点，结句尚能圈"。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">多少辛勤意，生辰未敢言。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p>

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">网上无年月，诗中有轮番。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: arial;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">"颈联不可点，结句尚能圈"。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: arial;">
                        <p>同感同感。</p></span></p><p>同感同感。</p>

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<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>绿杨烟外</i>在2007-6-1 19:40:38的发言：</b><br/>想叫师伯敲你么[em01][em01][em01]</div><p>还不是你逼的么，我说没改好，你偏说我骗人么？只好没改好也拿出来，总比骗人的我名声好！哼哼哼！</p>