夜宿玉華山,分韻得“笙”字，衍成七律一章兼寄江右諸吟長。

剧饮千杯

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">星河欲墮擁危城，久坐唯聞上界笙。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">對語元龍</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-ascii-font-family: GulimChe; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh;">真</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">國士，連宵<span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">鳴螫</span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">劇秋聲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">交遊瀚海誰懸榻，隔歲黃花合系情。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: #555555; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe;">遯</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">世翻疑殊域夢，瞰床風月正縱橫。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: GulimChe;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>

湘东诗苑

<font size="2"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: mingliu; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw; mso-ascii-font-family: gulimche; mso-hansi-font-family: gungsuh;">蠽即<font size="2">蝉</font><font size="5">,</font>何不直用</span>蝉</font>

青凤

句法老练，造语峭拔沉雄。

皎月

下半更好

江湖小李

<p>惜未与会！</p>

金水

<p><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: gulimche; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw;">交遊瀚海誰懸榻.</span></p><p><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: gulimche; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw;">问好江右第一帅哥，好久不见</span></p>

红叶

<p>哈哈，这下青衫兄要火了。：）</p><p>诗风似有变</p>

卷葹

<p>立意遣辞用力，结句好。对偶稍有不工。</p>

仰斋

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仰斋

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