学填满江红

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<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">滿江紅</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">啃軒先生六秩晉一祝嘏</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">六</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">月</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">廿九</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">六十年涯，憑誰問、滄浪清濁。唯消與、鬢絲霜淺，孤懷落寞。塵劫三千悲已往</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">，梅花十二成新約。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">[</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">一</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">]</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">慶</span><span lang="ZH-TW">延釐<span lang="ZH-TW">甲历祝</span></span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">重周</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">，從頭樂。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">桃李茂，雲霞灼。鷗盟會，詩酒若</span><span lang="ZH-TW">。更瑤編宏構，苦心耘作。文字窮蒐商與夏，本源溯證今非昨。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">[</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">二</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">]</span><span lang="ZH-TW">想先生濡墨漫揮毫，飛雲鶴。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 16.7pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.98; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><strong><font face="宋体"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">注：</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">[</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">一<span lang="EN-US">]</span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">先生新宅庭前植梅花十二，自號十二梅花館主。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">[</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">二</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">]</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">先生之<u style="text-underline: wave;">中國文字起源研究</u>行將完稿付梓。</span></font></strong><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/>

诗心云意

还学填呢，这么高的水平，欣赏。此中佳句迭出，令人欣喜不已。

仰斋

是有不少佳句，但<font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">度重周</span><span lang="ZH-TW">甲算</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">慶</span><span lang="ZH-TW">延釐，却恐是病句。</span></font>

无稽斋主

谢诗心夸赞,的确是首次学填此调,水平高云云,愧不敢当也.&nbsp;

无稽斋主

回仰老,那句是表达一种祝愿,当与后面三字连起看,应该没有问题,不知对否.

梅云

<font size="5">不惟赞其学识，亦称其人品，可谓善颂善祷！顺祝啃轩、无稽二兄生日快乐！</font>

<span lang="ZH-TW"><font size="4">想先生濡墨漫揮毫，按律应是上三下五，想先生后虽未加逗号，读时自然会在此处逗。<span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">度重周</span><span lang="ZH-TW">甲算</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">慶</span><span lang="ZH-TW">延釐</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">，句式与此相同，却不能读成三五。倒好像是五三式，恰恰相反。读来不爽。谱无无此例。又周甲便是六十岁，重（是读chong吧）周甲就是一百二十岁了。</span></font></span>

无稽斋主

诚谢梅云先生！

无稽斋主

<p>仰老,将"<font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">度重周</span><span lang="ZH-TW">甲算</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">慶</span><span lang="ZH-TW">延釐</span></font>"改为"<font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">慶</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">延釐甲</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">曆<span style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt;">祝</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.1pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">重周</span></font>"如何?</p>

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