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<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">離堆懷古</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">七月二十九日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font face="宋体" size="4">勳名李守著，大業古先崇。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font face="宋体" size="4">划石開瓶口，分流繼禹功。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font face="宋体" size="4">堰興天府富，道合自然融。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font face="宋体" size="4">紫坪新築壩，如何便不同。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="宋体"><font size="4">&nbsp;<p></p></font></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">丁亥季夏訪都江堰主人宴飲於南橋席間贈鄧英女士</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">七月二十九日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">置酒岷江岸，笙歌逐浪高。</font></span></p><p><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">美人舒玉臂，舞碎一江濤。</font></span></p>

青青子佩

<p>先生滴诗不及赋....嘻嘻,虽然赋偶没看懂.....但是,律却看懂了~~~~~</p><p>闪......气哭了偶不管哈[em26][em23][em27]</p>

红叶

<p><font size="4">舞醉一江濤。赏</font></p><p><font size="4">青青穿上汉服舞袖，应当有此效果的</font></p>[em10]

无稽斋主

<font size="4">青青也真是哈,知道了还揭人短,不过没必要闪,偶气不哭啦!</font>

无稽斋主

<p>红叶兄所言甚是,要是<font size="4">青青穿上汉服舞袖，会"舞碎一江濤"的啦!</font></p><p><font size="4">顺便改一下,裂石改为划石,舞醉改为舞碎.</font></p>

仰斋

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font face="宋体" size="4">堰興天府富，道合自然融。开发者可以观矣。</font></span></p></span>

无稽斋主

本来开发者应该观,却偏偏不观,<span lang="ZH-TW"><font face="宋体" size="4">紫坪水库更是在一片反对声中上马修建,奈何!</font></span>

水击三千

<p>说至道合自然，今人是远逊古人的，，</p><p>五绝不用这么用力吧，，，</p><p>律蕴文风</p>

红叶

划字改得更妥帖

无稽斋主

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>水击三千</i>在2007-7-30 20:10:28的发言：</b><br/><p>说至道合自然，今人是远逊古人的，，</p><p>五绝不用这么用力吧，，，</p><p>律蕴文风</p></div><p>谢水击三千兄光顾,私以为用力与否,要在求词达意畅,与诗体似没有多大的关系,未知对否.</p>