[原创]读诗有感

宜信

<p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">道本</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">无</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">居正，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">岂能</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">執偏頗;</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">江流推旧月，时势存新</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">我.</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">诗坛兴古韵</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">创意添薪</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">火</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">；</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;"></span></font><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">笔写人间事</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">情悯百姓</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">可。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">意象分层次</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">，诗</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">风生万</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">果;</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">今人寻古道</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">江右</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">安其左?</span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt;"><font face="宋体"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"></span></font></p><br/>

浔阳倦客

落网以来似乎宜老先生此首最好，只是结句不太明白的说^_^

鄱湖渔歌

<p>同倦客</p>

宜信

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">写得匆忙了些，<span lang="EN-US">1.</span>组句成篇少优美感，少比兴。<span lang="EN-US">2.</span>议论性过浓，且过白。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">倦兄问结句。其实是老话，“我们江西的古典诗歌爱好者，不要重犯我们的老祖宗（黄庭坚）们犯过的错误，寻古仿古，不可过左。”<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; mso-line-height-alt: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black;">　　谢谢关注！<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>

浔阳倦客

老黄也没有犯什么大错，只是有时喜欢点化前人的东东和拗句而已，至于生涩是我辈浅薄。很多诗还是狠耐读的……