盥頌仰齋存稿寄傅義先生

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<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 1cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">盥頌仰齋存稿寄<personname wst="on" productid="傅義">傅義</personname>先生</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">八月十七日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">公是宜春大雅人，白頭吟望益情真。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">素懷已付中天月，清夢猶憐劫後身。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">轉覺晚霞無限好，行歌夫子信能陳。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">曾經吊薛同幽怨，何日重來證幻因。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p><font face="宋体" size="4">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">登秦堰樓</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">八月十九日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">秦堰樓高處，涼生肘腋間。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">近峰含遠岫，幽鳥入澄灣。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">道悟三生幸，情消一味閑。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">江波流萬古，逝者杳難攀。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: line; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p><strong><font face="宋体" size="5">&nbsp;</font></strong></p></span></p>

卷葹

七律结得较弱。第二首整体更好，惟第三句意象不明。

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<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>卷葹</i>在2007-8-19 20:03:02的发言：</b><br/>七律结得较弱。第二首整体更好，惟第三句意象不明。</div><p>谢段先生赏评指谬.七律的结,本意即在求平和也.至于五律第三句,乃登楼所见,其时天气不错,层峦叠嶂,尽在眼前,近峰远岫,浑然一体,故有此也.</p><p>再谢!</p>

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<p>承惠佳章，一是感谢，二是喜欢。惟素怀没那么高，情真倒是一直想做到的。第七句似应加注。</p><p>登秦堰楼后半更好。</p>

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仰老客气,令后学汗颜.近来甚忙,容俟暇书奉.