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水击三千

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: list 0cm;"><span style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: list 0cm;"><span style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">东效行去柏苍苍，四下萧萧落白杨。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: list 0cm;"><span style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">秋逐青春感节候，时来忧思望潇湘，<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: list 0cm;"><span style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">既从中路悲麟失，何向云端泣凤殇。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: list 0cm;"><span style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">风卷浮尘争乱眼，且于醉后说清凉。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p>

东华人氏

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; tab-stops: list 0cm;"><span style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font color="#000000">颔联似可炼。</font>风卷浮尘争乱眼，且于醉后说清凉－－喜欢！<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p>

水击三千

谢东华兄了，我可是第一个写的，不知有什么特别的好处？

华仔

<span style="COLOR: #222222; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">既从中路悲麟失，何向云端泣凤殇。这个志气大</span>

维扬

醉后说清凉，意味无穷。