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<font face="宋体"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">紀念歐陽修千年誕辰步仰齋丈元玉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">十月</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">十五</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW">人間難得此英才，睥睨文壇拔草萊。</span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW">盡斥流風推古樸，從教異代仰崔嵬。</span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW">醉名獨許留山水，世網真須付盞杯。</span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW">蕭瑟秋聲今又是，清魂何處撥新醅。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 13.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><font size="3">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">丁亥九日登樓寄遠應中鎮詩社用小杜九日齊山登高韻</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">十月</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">十五</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">
                                                        <p></p></span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font size="3">憑高意共白雲飛，樓外江天入翠微。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font size="3">雁陣一行猶未遠，陽關三疊直須歸。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font size="3">爲望兄弟同明月，不插茱萸向落暉。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font size="3">客裏溫情想應少，莫教此日寄寒衣。</font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"></p></span></font></font>

仰斋

纪念欧公出言得体，且富情采，真佳作也。九日诗已于赐和处跟帖，不另。

颖庐

<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW">蕭瑟秋聲今又是，清魂何處撥新醅。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: zh-cn;">
                        </span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: zh-cn;"><span lang="ZH-TW"><font size="3">爲望兄弟同明月，不插茱萸向落暉。</font></span></span></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: zh-cn;"><span lang="ZH-TW">意深辞美。</span><p></p></span></font></p><p></p>

无稽斋主

<p>仰翁谬赞,段先生摘句,俱愧煞愚晚.二先生可学处尚多,当多多指谬才好!</p><p>还请仰翁贴示大作,愚晚之和,乃观江右诸君之作也.</p>

浔阳倦客

<p>一的颈联挺拔，学习唯觉世网略生</p><p>二唯觉尾联稍感意外：）））</p>

无稽斋主

回倦兄,世网盖即尘网之谓也,换个说法而已.其二之尾联,与前一脉贯通,唯正话反说,稍显隐了一点,是以兄觉得意外,不好意思.

浔阳倦客

明白了哈没有注意题目汗

无稽斋主

再谢倦兄赏光!

叶子

欣赏学习无稽兄好诗！

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