过五峰福寿庵

水击三千

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">客自东来上五峰，翠峦深处访禅踪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">通幽曲径苔痕浅，委地繁花霜色浓。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">缭绕茶烟犹旧识，殷勤衲子尚初逢。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">凭谁翻悟曾经事，云向天边迷万重。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p>

浔阳倦客

亦是四平八稳，赏3联，觉得尚字迷字可酌

皎月

很喜欢后半,意境也好

向闲

尚字太实，宜用似字。

水击三千

<p>谢哈，</p><p>谢卢兄，正愁不会用什么字呢，及时雨，，，</p>

江湖小李

<p>终于得句了？！</p>

水击三千

这个不是，步韵发兄的博上了，，，就不发坛子里了。

颖庐

<p>前半叙事写景，后半再添幽思，故有渐入佳境之妙。</p><p>向闲兄的“似”字比“尚”字好多了。初逢，故殷勤，而着一似字，又不是初逢呢！可见山深寺古，游踪罕至，僧人之情、禅客之心，皆有刻画。</p>

湘东诗苑

老是进不了江右网，不知为什么，学习梅兄好诗．