[原创]沁园春 送别

弘云居士

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">沁园春</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">送别</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">此去何由？为志孤行？为梦高飞？忆修枝映月，相邀皎洁；倾桡荡水，环抱涟漪。年少多情，青春有爱。汽笛声中道别离。天涯外，见层云漫卷，泪湿襟衣。<br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">征车带尽相思。问碌碌人生搏几回？记花仙搔首，切无眷恋；杜康弄影，别再贪杯。千种叮咛，万般嘱咐。欲晓乘风自奋蹄。收郎信，若</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">QQ</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">掉线，偶等手机。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">手机手字当平~</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/><br/><br/>

鄱湖渔歌

托女子口吻,有趣.但觉得过于直白

向闲

不止手字出律。<font face="宋体">相拥之拥，实是仄声。又博似当为搏。此词下片欲融入现代语，然一“奴”字大不协。试问当今用QQ女子，果否会以“奴”自称否？</font>

弘云居士

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>鄱湖渔歌</i>在2007-10-25 7:07:32的发言：</b><br/>托女子口吻,有趣.但觉得过于直白</div><p>谢渔歌兄指教~问好`</p>

弘云居士

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2007-10-25 8:07:07的发言：</b><br/>不止手字出律。<font face="宋体">相拥之拥，实是仄声。又博似当为搏。此词下片欲融入现代语，然一“奴”字大不协。试问当今用QQ女子，果否会以“奴”自称否？</font></div><p>问好向闲兄,谢不吝赐教~~ </p><p>拥字兄若不言,小的一直把他当平声用,学习了,博为笔误,用汉拼输入,奴确不协,改过,请兄再砍~ </p><p></p>[em10][em10][em10][em10]

虔青草

送别之情表达很好。结句确实太白了。