丁亥立冬前夕寄喜英先生

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<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">丁亥立冬</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: normal; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">前夕</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">寄喜英先生</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">十一月</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: normal; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">七</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">去年此日鬱懷開，爲有南川藻翰來。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">妙筆縱然推雅矣，閑情豈便賦悠哉。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">橫流滄海千般劫，換作閻浮一堁埃。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">耽樂誰知未央殿，笙歌夜夜繞樓臺。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p><strong><font face="宋体" size="5">&nbsp;</font></strong></p></span></p>

浔阳倦客

<p><font size="4">堁字等我查字典去：））</font></p><p><font size="4">推雅矣&nbsp; 不喜颔联</font></p>

水击三千

结联有些意外，

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<p>倦兄、三千兄各有砖头，一并收下并致谢！</p><p>颔联之法，愚亦偶一为之。而尾联有回扣起联之意，正是作意所在。愚之构思如此！</p>

颖庐

<p>斋主不解释，还以为末联是讽喻呢。</p><p><font size="4">堁埃，并列的名词，对不上“千般劫”。</font></p>

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<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>颖庐</i>在2007-11-9 9:01:35的发言：</b><br/><p>斋主不解释，还以为末联是讽喻呢。</p><p><font size="4">堁埃，并列的名词，对不上“千般劫”。</font></p></div><p>回段先生,尾联确有说的讽喻之意,只是不便说明.读者当自味之也!至于颈联,原作一砚埃,后改作此,稍求其宽也.</p>