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青青子佩

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 11pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">人生无计解忧烦，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">网际消磨说纪元。<br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">已惯西风侵驿道，遥怜</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">暮雪锁篱藩。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 11pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">青山幽渺谁传讯，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">残酒凄凉我忘言。<br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">梦里乍逢星点点，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">当时相顾只寒暄。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 11pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"></p><p></p></span>

殊熠在天

<p>子佩的七律也开始得味了。</p><p>青山幽渺能改改或好些。</p><p>星光点点为梦境平添不少浪漫气氛哈。末句让偶或许会这么写：只相凝视未寒暄。</p>

红叶

<p>鼠这么一改那就更绝了，话都不让青青说：）</p><p>点点星光下，两人只凝视不言。。。好浪漫哦</p>

浔阳倦客

<p>比偶步的好哈</p><p>只是驿道如今难找哈</p>

青青子佩

<p>多谢老鼠,这个改了更好[em17]</p><p></p>