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发表于 2007-12-1 13:35:31 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
苍茫云水入画屏,无尽松涛留客听。<br/>山雨千层天际黑,齐烟九点海东青。<br/>怕寻芳草添幽梦,漫指斜阳落小庭。<br/>别路风光莺不语,一声玉笛短长亭。<br/><br/><br/>
发表于 2007-12-1 19:13:26 | 显示全部楼层
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">好诗,突然想起:</span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">《有美堂暴雨》:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">游人脚底一声雷,满座顽云拨不开。天外黑风吹海立,浙东飞雨过江来。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">十分潋滟金樽凸,千杖敲铿羯鼓催。唤起谪仙泉洒面,倒倾鲛室泻琼瑰。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: green; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><p></p></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span></p></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span>
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发表于 2007-12-1 22:32:01 | 显示全部楼层
後半尤好 首聯音律愈見跌宕
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发表于 2007-12-2 01:23:50 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏!问风露兄好!
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-3 09:55:52 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>连云港渔夫</i>在2007-12-1 19:13:26的发言:</b><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">好诗,突然想起:</span></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">《有美堂暴雨》:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">游人脚底一声雷,满座顽云拨不开。天外黑风吹海立,浙东飞雨过江来。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">十分潋滟金樽凸,千杖敲铿羯鼓催。唤起谪仙泉洒面,倒倾鲛室泻琼瑰。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: green; LINE-HEIGHT: 125%;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span></p></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span></div><p>谢连云港兄,你是连云港人吧?我们离得很近啊,我是新沂人。现在也在新沂。</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-3 09:56:33 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>一得愚生</i>在2007-12-1 22:32:01的发言:</b><br/>後半尤好 首聯音律愈見跌宕</div><p>谢一得兄雅正。</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-3 09:56:50 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>剑尘</i>在2007-12-2 1:23:50的发言:</b><br/>欣赏!问风露兄好!</div><p></p>谢剑尘兄。问好。
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发表于 2007-12-3 10:21:58 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏!问好老乡!
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-3 10:42:16 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>东华人氏</i>在2007-12-3 10:21:58的发言:</b><br/>欣赏!问好老乡!</div><p>东华兄何乡何处?</p>
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