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炉边闲咏(续一）

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仰斋
发表于 2007-12-30 11:42:03 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 14.25pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">纨扇</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">裘葛长轮转，天行若有常。风随摇摆至，月共黑甜藏。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">沧海飞尘土，金銮逐帝王。君今舞台上，士女尚轻扬。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 14.25pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">香蕉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">炎方缺凉气，原在此中藏。恃尔能消暑，撩人急润肠。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">浑身无媚骨，常物有余芳。南海椰风岸，佳珍欲尽尝。</span><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p>
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发表于 2007-12-31 11:51:44 | 显示全部楼层
更喜第一首！祝仰老新年快乐！
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向闲
发表于 2007-12-31 14:25:20 | 显示全部楼层
香蕉尾联失粘，先生是否疏忽了（我们也常疏忽的）。
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颖庐
发表于 2008-1-2 10:08:09 | 显示全部楼层
久疏存问，谨此叩拜新正吉祥！
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仰斋
 楼主| 发表于 2008-1-2 11:38:37 | 显示全部楼层
<p>天堂兄好意，我慢慢思考。</p><p>东华兄说的不错，第二首我也自认更差。</p><p>向闲兄说得对。首太差，既已发帖，就多改一些。</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">炎方缺凉气，原在此中藏。恃尔能消暑，撩人急润肠。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 教</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: arial;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 欲</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;">浑身无媚骨，常物有余芳。南海椰风岸，佳珍欲尽尝。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 高格&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 此二句失粘，不录</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;"></span><span style="mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: zh-cn;"></span></p>
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