携醉

水击三千

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">携醉长街上，风牵雨线来。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">浮光湿眼底，老树又花开。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">景易疑为客，衣沉未洗埃。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">驰车如水过，识得几人回。</span></p>

草啸

<p>喜其二之意蕴，却不爽其未属对。</p><p>其六似有疑问，衣附尘埃，雨水已经代洗了，但，醉后的前襟油渍除外哈。</p>

红叶

<p>最近大家创作欲望上来了 要多回帖以示支持：）</p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">浮光湿眼底，老树又花开。同草啸意见，湿字喜，又字似可炼？</span></p><p></p>

湘东诗苑

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">驰车如水过，识得几人回.</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">独立石桥人不识,一星如月立多时.</span></p>

无稽斋主

自然流畅，起结均佳！

青青子佩

<p>五律滴二联很值得推敲呢。</p><p>虽不对，可意好，和一得先生是同伙呢：）</p>