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风露中宵

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">无声霜冷千山外，惹梦烟销一柳边。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">老木寒云伤杜宇，乱流永夜吐婵娟。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">功名寰内合分事，尘树人间起灭禅。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">不尽鱼龙归冻水，起看星雨落长天。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p>

今是昨非斋

<p>首联味足。欣赏！</p>

云楼月

<p>通首有老杜气派，欣赏，学</p>[em17][em23][em23]

浔阳倦客

<p>不喜颈联</p><p>爱尾巴：）））</p>

风露中宵

谢三兄批评。

向山主人

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">功名寰内合分事，尘树人间起灭禅。——此联寄意深远，唯承转欠密。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">首尾联亦甚好！</span></p>

风露中宵

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向山主人</i>在2008-3-27 13:06:46的发言：</b><br/><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">功名寰内合分事，尘树人间起灭禅。——此联寄意深远，唯承转欠密。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">首尾联亦甚好！</span></p></div><p></p>再谢向山兄雅正。