[原创]淡黄柳 依白石四声

瀚海胡杨

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">淡黄柳</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">依白石四声</span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">风侵水陌</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">吹得桐花</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">落。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">远望春山烟漠</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">漠。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">料想江城倦</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">客，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">遥举清樽共谁</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">酌？</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">梦重</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">约，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">鸥边寄忧</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">乐。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">雨窗</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">底，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">猛惊</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">觉。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">叹河梁别后闲弦</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">索。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">抱恨凭</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">栏，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">暗期良</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">夜，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">千里同吟桂</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">魄。</span></p>

东华人氏

<p>欣赏好词，流畅，上下照应得体，两结俱好！</p>

一得愚生

四聲俱遵 而不見鑿痕 殊難得

皎月

平稳深醇

剧饮千杯

下闋尤好

瀚海胡杨

多谢东华兄赐评!

瀚海胡杨

<p>一得兄好!</p><p>十分感谢一得兄的赐评!还望多指正!</p>

瀚海胡杨

谢谢皎月的赐评!

瀚海胡杨

还望剧饮兄多雅正!