步韻黃仲則四章之一

萧散

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="6"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">關河渺莽望中遮，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">西嶺日潛餘晚霞。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;"><br/></span><font size="6"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">陌路霜痕侵白袷，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">故園風色折繁花。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;"><br/></span><font size="6"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">但教每慮居無竹，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">豈更奢求出有車。</span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU;"><br/></span><font size="6"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">燈黯長街延客影，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">剩將身世逐浮華。</span></font></p><br/>

梅岭野人

<font size="6"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="6"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">燈黯長街延客影，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: pmingliu; mso-ascii-font-family: tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-fareast-language: zh-tw; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">剩將身世逐浮華。</span></font></p><p>好诗，读之良多感慨。如幻此生此身，不知欲归终归。</p><p>但教二字有点问题，好象希望居无竹似的。此联试为改作：最怜（已教）长是居无竹，敢更奢求出有车。应该就没问题了，供酌。</p></span></font><br/>

萧散

谢兄指点。所改甚佳，容酌．

浔阳倦客

基本同意鼠兄