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[原创]忆旧游 秋游景德镇得雨生态园感旧

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发表于 2008-10-23 22:08:11 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">忆旧游</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">秋游景德镇得雨生态园感旧</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">渐遥岑日落</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">古木禽</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">归，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">蝉咽凉</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">秋。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">野径寻残</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">梦，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">剩溪光幻</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">影，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">柳线牵</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">愁。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">断红送客何</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">处？</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">云际水空</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">流。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">怅雨洗阶</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">尘，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">霜侵岸</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">草，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">漫忆盟</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">鸥。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">桥</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">头。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">意难</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">忘，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">奈叶老风</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">中，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">纷坠荒</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">沟。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">别后人千</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">里，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">念飘零如</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">雁，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">谁伴清</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">游？</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">薄情暮霭催</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">去，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">无计泛扁</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">舟。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">料两地沉</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">吟，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">宵深望月重倚</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">楼。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p>
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皎月
发表于 2008-10-24 19:52:37 | 显示全部楼层
尤喜后片
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-10-25 00:24:53 | 显示全部楼层
多谢皎月赐评!
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叶子
发表于 2008-10-29 00:54:03 | 显示全部楼层
再欣赏陈师兄好词,最近我也在琢磨此调,惜难摸透还~
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-10-31 15:08:08 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢叶子赐评!
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向闲
发表于 2008-10-31 15:40:08 | 显示全部楼层
好词，味足。
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发表于 2008-10-31 16:00:39 | 显示全部楼层
同闲兄！的确好。
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金水
发表于 2008-10-31 17:14:19 | 显示全部楼层
<p>拜读欣赏</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-4 20:06:04 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢向闲兄赐评!
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-4 20:10:25 | 显示全部楼层
今是昨非斋兄夸奖了,还望多多雅正!
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