冬夜园中独坐次韵和邱登成

仰斋

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红叶

险韵，力挺：）

一得愚生

手機已先睹，此時拜讀，印象更加深刻。仰老詩盡去鉛華，所謂“絢爛之極歸於平淡”也。

子二

<p>仰老好诗！</p><p>似乎颔联得来容易了些。</p><p>禁当似乎可以删一字吗？禁和当算不算同义词呀？</p>

仰斋

<p>谢红叶，一得，子二兄。为了加强语气，同义词可以连用，对否？</p>