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[原创]七律·春到人间另眼看(五首)

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发表于 2009-2-5 15:14:31 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">一</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">已丑春来强赋诗,啼鸪唤处有情痴。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">登临欲发千山意,顺势频收百态姿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">唱别当初谁记取,恨逢近日雁归迟。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">今人不识江南道,遍插城楼是酒旗。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="4">二&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="4">二&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">鸿归燕啄柳枝芽,游子逢春又别家。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">陌上风吹山渐绿,天涯岁减鬓增华。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">平安四季凭云寄,祭祀三牲任梦赊。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">眼见他乡桃李艳,忧心故里尙飞沙。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="4">三&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="4">三&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">雷人一语坐中惊,戏说官场硕鼠横。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">穷汉空囊遭贼扰,富人香榭驾车行。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">牛年准是金钱火,鸟语何如央视声。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">好歹无关春自立,歪诗写就待天清。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4">四 </font></p><font size="4"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><personname wst="on" productid="东"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></personname></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><personname wst="on" productid="东"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">东</span></personname><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">君着雨入园新,乍暖还寒是早春。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">夜里鸿声归未绝,篱边草色渐初匀。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">缓流溪水融残雪,半落梅花待故人。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">月出西山重置酒,危栏独倚看移轮。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman"></font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">五&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">桃花未映美人腮,欲写春诗却拙才。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">昔日知音何处去,新正皎月此时来。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">五言酒醉依陶体,八句辞穷别凤台。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">愿得仙招磨笔力,锦云不必梦中裁。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><br/></p></font><br/>
发表于 2009-2-5 16:36:12 | 显示全部楼层
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">夜里鸿声归未绝,篱边草色渐初匀。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">缓流溪水融残雪,半落梅花待故人。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;">
                        <p>好句!</p></span></p><p>好句!</p>
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发表于 2009-2-5 23:06:17 | 显示全部楼层
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">登临欲发千山意,顺势频收百态姿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"> 此联太勉强。<p></p></span></font></p><p></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-2-6 22:21:25 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢惜梦缘君、向闲兄!登临句拟改,谁能助一笔之力?!</p><p>另加三首:</p><p>  一</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 逝水流年看纸黄,别君曲莫叠悲凉。<br/>  窗前明月随云晦,海外归心任梦长。<br/>  远树栖鸦终是客,疏篱垦地且为乡。<br/>  平生能搏几回醉,异样情怀独自藏。<br/>  </p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 二<br/>  桃溪夹岸木成林,石枕清流立翠禽。<br/>  侧耳倾听春踏步,明眸远眺雁归吟。<br/>  风吹劲竹扬青色,日照群峰孕热忱。<br/>  花事如潮应可待,长条无数意能任。<br/>  </p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 三<br/>  昨夜东君悄入门,一杯美酒醒春魂。<br/>  山空百鸟齐朝凤,雨润重霄共感恩。<br/>  盛世平生逢不易,疏篱小草赖相存。<br/>  清明自有高歌赋,来者无须囿古论。<br/></p><font></font>
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