琵琶亭

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<div style="BORDER-RIGHT: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid; PADDING-LEFT: 8pt; BACKGROUND: white; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; BORDER-LEFT: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid;"><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 7.5pt 0cm 0pt 142.5pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #A9D46D .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">曲声愁色两相侵，座上青衫恐不禁。</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 142.5pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; mso-border-alt: solid #A9D46D .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">快劝琵琶弦莫发，一江秋水泪森森。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p></div><br/>

向闲

淋淋，自上而下之象，恐与江水不洽。

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<p>向闲兄说得很是，昨晚作得急了些：）</p><p>本是想说这一江秋水俱是座中司马泪淋淋时所泣下之泪，看来是表达不清楚，我再想想如何改：）</p>

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<div style="BORDER-RIGHT: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid; PADDING-LEFT: 8pt; BACKGROUND: white; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; BORDER-LEFT: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: #a9d46d 0.75pt solid;"><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 7.5pt 0cm 0pt 142.5pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-border-alt: solid #a9d46d .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:tahoma;">曲声愁色两相侵，座上青衫恐不禁。</span><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-RIGHT: 0cm; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-LEFT: 0cm; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0cm; MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt 142.5pt; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; PADDING-TOP: 0cm; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; mso-border-alt: solid #a9d46d .75pt; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 0cm 0cm 8.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:tahoma;">快劝琵琶弦莫发，一江秋水泪森森。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: tahoma;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p></div>改一改，只能如此了：）

红叶

我们去的时候应该是春水[em01]

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<p>我知道：）</p><p>我写的不是我们去的时候，是写的当时情景，所以才会有劝琵琶莫发一句：）</p>

红叶

<p>呵呵，玩笑的。</p><p>森森终觉不太稳，泪涔涔如何</p>

离垢居

<p>多谢红叶兄：）</p><p>涔涔：形容泪、血、汗等液体不断流出或渗出貌。 这个词我考虑过了的，觉得也不甚妥当。。。</p><p></p><p>总之绿烟才力不够，无法写得如意：（</p>