七绝。月下谁吹玉笛寒

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<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6">一</font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6">月下谁吹玉笛寒，空林疏影暮秋烟。</font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6">流光何事随风老，绣榻飞声正未眠。 </font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; 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TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6">二</font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6">秋庐沉寂菊扶栏，月下谁吹玉笛寒。<br/>&nbsp; 云墨难书清梦冷，几多旧誓透心酸。</font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; 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TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6"></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0033ff" size="6">暮鼓声声秋径隐，风吟竹韵绕山峦。<br/>&nbsp; 今宵露冷仙踪杳，月下谁吹玉笛寒。</font><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<p><font size="6"></font></p></span></b></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p><font size="6"></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p><br/>&nbsp;2008.10.28</p><br/><br/>

今是昨非斋

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浔阳倦客

<p>句子都很不错</p><p>就是不明主旨</p><p>冷色调词多</p>

虞某人

<strong><font face="宋体" color="#0033ff" size="6">绣榻飞声正未眠，喜欢这句</font></strong>

叶子

梦缘MM也玩轱辘，佩服一个`

天一谷

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2009-4-10 13:33:06的发言：</b><br/><p>句子都很不错</p><p>就是不明主旨</p><p>冷色调词多</p></div><p>也同意的，而且取意象多前人惯用二三旧物，无非花月竹影，怕是烂熟，再无多少视觉冲击力．</p>

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