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碧草凝香

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 4.3pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">五律<span lang="EN-US">*</span>春钓<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 4.3pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">钓晚明霞淡<span lang="EN-US">,</span>闲槎泛涘州<span lang="EN-US">.</span>清风扶客酒<span lang="EN-US">,</span>弱柳隐江眸<span lang="EN-US">.<p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 4.3pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">得意春光味<span lang="EN-US">,</span>疏狂楚地喉<span lang="EN-US">.</span>归兮邀好月<span lang="EN-US">,</span>不挂古今愁<span lang="EN-US">.<p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 4.3pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">五律<span lang="EN-US">*</span>春味<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 4.3pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">慢煨新茶久<span lang="EN-US">,</span>听风叩牖东<span lang="EN-US">.</span>行云平仄里<span lang="EN-US">,</span>品味凡尘中<span lang="EN-US">.<p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 4.3pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">莫论江湖苦<span lang="EN-US">,</span>何嗟岁月空<span lang="EN-US">.</span>常敲身外事<span lang="EN-US">,</span>一笑诩陶翁<span lang="EN-US">.<p></p></span></span></b></p>

草啸

欢迎新朋友！

浔阳倦客

<p>欢迎先</p><p>楼主词似乎好于诗</p>

鄱湖渔歌

据说是以词见长,五律喜其一

一得愚生

歡迎碧草姑娘！<br/>整體都不錯,其一頸聯或能再煉，其二中二稍覺空泛。

碧草凝香

嗯嗯,问好各位前辈咯,来学习的哈,请多多指点咯

叶子

同一得兄，另不挂古今愁，莫若不问古今愁。