[转帖]湖北考生古体长诗《站在黄花岗陵园的门口》获评高考“最牛满分作文”

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">ost By</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">：</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">2009-6-23 13:18:00<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>ost IP</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">：</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">121.17.225.247 </font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">http://news.ifeng.com/mainland/200906/0623_17_1215323.shtml</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">湖北考生古体长诗获评高考“最牛满分作文”</span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><chsdate wst="on" isrocdate="False" islunardate="False" day="23" month="06" year="2009"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">2009</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">06</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">月</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">23</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">日</span></chsdate><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> 11:05</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">荆楚网</span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">记者昨采访高考阅卷情况时，多位作文阅卷老师一致介绍，一篇名为《站在黄花岗陵园的门口》的古体长诗</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">(</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">全文附后</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">)</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">，被他们评为今年高考语文“最牛满分作文”。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">该作文共</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">1080</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">字</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">(</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">含标点符号</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">)</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">，文首是一段</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">170</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">多字的文言文，介绍了该诗歌的写作背景——</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">2008</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年作者参观黄花岗七十二烈士陵园，“百感并至，赋诗一首。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">”诗歌共</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">51</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">行</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">102</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">句，每句七言；后记约</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">70</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">字，也是文言文写作。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">“形式和内容表现上都堪称一流。”武汉某省级示范高中阅卷老师介绍，该作文采用古诗词的形式，虽然是采用的历史题材，但表达了敬仰、向上的感情，内容并不空洞。另一位老师表示，作为中学生，能选择这种文体写作，并运用得比较成熟，说明这名学生读了很多书，有一定的古典文学功底。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">站在黄花岗陵园的门口</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">清宣统三年三月二十九日</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">(</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">西元一九一一年四月二十七日</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">)</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">，广州起义暴发。起义之军百二十人持枪械攻入广州督府衙门，两广总督张鸣歧闻风而逃。然义军终因寡不敌众，数百清军围之，起义军多战死。旋革命党人潘达微见而怜之，收烈士之骸，止得七十二具，葬于白云山麓之黄花岗。九十七年之后，时值腊月，会天大雪，余滞于广州，遂至黄花岗七十二烈士之陵。止于其门，百感并至，赋诗一首，诗曰</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">: </font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">赤焰难明赤县天，百年群魔舞翩跹。国土已破何人见，金瓯早缺有谁怜？</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">皇祚不复天威去，天朝迷梦化为烟。五口通商香港失，断鸿声中夷舰现。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
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                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">新鬼啾啾旧鬼哭，京洼难日见炊烟。宣战诏书何处寻？言说帝后西秋狝。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">辛丑条约庚子恨，落日秋风哭宝剑。六十年来伤国步，八千里外吊民残。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
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                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">民穷国敝割土地，偿银赔款年复年。可怜越女夜夜哭，半国殖民半封建。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">檀香山上聚义士，兴中会中复青天。烈火已燃锤与镰，今将炮火灭清廷。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">枪声惊破五羊城，英雄无惧挥宝剑。提携玉泉为国死，何得英名在人间。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">悲歌一曲从天落，壮士不再歌易水。晓见江山有炊烟，烈士之魂已沉泉。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">人生百年能几何，荒草斜阳土坯间。白云片片魂悠悠，黄花遍野使人愁。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">义军已覆化碧土，留得精神载史书。黄花岗上土一抔，埋没荒烟蔓草间。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">起事何知一死难，的卢青骢劳鞍鞯。青天白日满地红，镶开碑上覆墓间。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">行人往往悲旧事，含愤长忆孙逸仙。无量头颅无量血，可怜换得假共和。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">皇冠已覆君前落，不见人间少帝制。百越之人总不忘，秋风秋雨湿黄花。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">愁看长江东逝去，却有青史映君前。莫悲往事愤钩沉，但看祖国焕新颜。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">沧桑浮沉忆浮生，吾辈发奋应向前。岁月如潮歌似梦，百年弹指一挥间。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红尘梦里忆壮举，烈士陵前有愧颜。吾侪不曾历战火，无复见此漫硝烟。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">和平岁月忆往事，史海沧茫不亲见。今春南岭雪满天，雪映梅花忠魂骨。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">碧血横飞四塞惊，草木含情风云悲。只因烈士血如海，才使日月换新天。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">英雄何只黄花岗，无数忠魂红旗间。百兆国子怀先辈，万里江山动后人。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">召公甘为社稷死，感君总能多奉献。至今天下传英名，不使君没蔓草间。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">今之河山多锦绣，不复沉沦如从前。工厂遍地多铁马，信息时代在眼前。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">民众康乐少悲苦，难以再见愁容颜。吾今立于陵门口，思绪纷飞感万千。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">聊诌一诗悼君魂，勿怪字拙人不见。</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                </font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">后记</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">:</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">今日之生活，皆先辈流血而成，今中国多烈士之陵，何止黄花岗耶？然吾平生只至黄花岗，愧矣。今年之秋，料黄花岗之黄花，应于秋风之中透香中华乎？</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> (</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">来源</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">:</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">荆楚网</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">-</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">楚天都市报</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">)(</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">记者罗欣</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">)</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p>

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