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胖大海

<p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="COLOR: red; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">访阳春草堂</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;;"><p></p></span></b></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span style="mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">蛰居惟竹菊，堂主与谁争？镜外千帆远，山前一径明。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span style="mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">浮华随梦去，衰瘦伴秋生。黄耳柴门吠，莫非有客盈？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">车过铁扇关</font></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">铁扇扇秋水，飞车过险关。羊肠存百结，白练隐千弯。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left;"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">潆起知鱼乐，林深羡鸟闲。晚烟惊脆笛，一涧几回环？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt;"><p></p></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/>

向闲

胖兄诗大有进境，两首颈联俱甚佳，结句嫌弱。

胖大海

<p>谢向兄鼓励和鞭策~~~</p><p>谢向坛主亲自消灭0回帖~~~</p>