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七律·潍水秋寄步老杜秋兴八韵

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发表于 2009-9-30 09:48:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">七律·潍水秋寄步老杜秋兴八韵<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">一<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">风雕霜刻异乡林,落叶声哗郁气森。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">客独何堪逢月照,枝疏未可蔽云阴。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">家山西望篱前菊,雁阵南归塞外心。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">孤影徘徊难寄意,谁能永夜听寒砧。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">二<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">滩荒独对夕阳斜,</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">黙</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">恨秋潮流岁华。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></font></strong></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">帆事无忧依野岸,雁心空急望云槎。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">鸥鸣直似舟中笛,蓬逐如闻塞上笳。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">青鬓当追鹏翼舞,吴钩何意醉黄花?<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">三<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">独抱秋情怜夕晖,云霞何灿客何微。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">邯郸热枕嗤心逐,稻稷寒罗笑鸟飞。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">对菊风怀相去远,缠丝俗事竟难违。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">几时得倚东篱望,新钓鲈鱼辨瘦肥。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">四<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">人生碌碌一盘棋,汉水波深楚卒悲。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">战事逼催难驻足,浮身直往不归时。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">前瞻胜果知非远,回念无因总是迟。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">佳景怡情叹自误,长途几个可醒思。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">五<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">滩荒千里望无山,但晓蓬瀛沧海间。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">入梦频怜清角雪,挥杯羡出玉门关。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">沐寒豪饮驱轻马,未老闲居有愧颜。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">困顿潍波空俗钓,几时忝列将军班。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">六<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">惭共芦花竟白头,倏然四十五春秋。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">回眸检点多生怨,前路逡巡仍寄愁。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">阻我欣无林里虎,知心惟有浪中鸥。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">焉能击楫长帆逐,任纵豪情遍九州。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">七<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">能见霜颜岁月功,五年不惑命知中。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">人情圆缺休依月,世事高低但问风。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">未变冰心随竹绿,难移腊雪伴梅红。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">任他指笑时宜背,头触南墙半老翁。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">八<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><strong><font color="#0000ff"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">潍河潮涌望逶迤,</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;">黙</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">共孤舟倚草陂。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></font></font></strong></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">故土遥知飞北雁,他乡稀见向南枝。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">梦中赏菊时应转,波上逢鸥志未移。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><strong><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">怅念杯邀村外月,还思劲翼傍云垂</font>。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></strong></span></p><p></p><p></p>
发表于 2009-9-30 16:36:04 | 显示全部楼层
<p>欣赏!一之雁阵南归不妥。二鸟过多。五将军班疑似三平尾。八首句出韵。</p>
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发表于 2009-9-30 22:21:09 | 显示全部楼层
<p>欣赏 好才情&nbsp;佳节快乐!</p><p>&nbsp;</p>[em23][em23][em23][em24]
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发表于 2009-10-1 21:02:16 | 显示全部楼层
问好浪兄节日快乐
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发表于 2009-10-5 17:15:16 | 显示全部楼层
首句用邻韵亦不为出韵。和八首不易,惜无老杜阔大气象。沐寒豪饮联颇佳。
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