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发表于 2009-10-4 23:14:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p><span></span></p><p><span></span></p><p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 20px;">高阳台&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr> 游梅岭法圆寺戏赠殊熠</font></p><p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 20px;">&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 积翠封阶,清阴度槛,隔林溪送潺湲。鹤老云中,风花开谢年年。菩提树底缘将熟,踏秋回、有客翩然。忏前尘、衣浣空香,钵粲青莲。&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 蒲团坐脱茫茫劫,把疏狂尽卸,影事重删。招手斜阳,茗边与话萧闲。汲泉山下芒鞋印,正悠悠,担月初还。启松窗,放入烟霞,为伴诗禅。</font></p><p>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></p><p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 20px;">甘州&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr> 己丑中秋</font></p><p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 20px;">&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;&nbsp; <wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>望破云山势欲东来,影入绛河流。正清辉乍满,素衣孤倚,短笛层楼。桂魄当窗恰好,玉斧莫轻修。留得婆娑意,补梦温柔。&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;&nbsp; 争忍思量千古,听一声弹指,天地悠悠。更苍凉夜曲,惊堕雁边秋。拾空庭、飘萧落叶,怕题来,都是世间愁。高寒外,惹何人又,特地凝眸?</font></p><p>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></p><p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 20px;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA;">浣溪纱</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font size="5">&nbsp;<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr>&nbsp;&nbsp; <wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA;">次韵苍筠阿姨中秋寄友<br/></span></font><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 20px;">谁散人天一色花?淡熏冰魄素馨斜,琐窗暂莫放帘遮。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 20px;">清夜流光摇蜃阁,碧灯扶梦上星槎。缘君拟泛海之涯。</font></span></p><br/><br/><br/><br/>
发表于 2009-10-6 22:17:40 | 显示全部楼层
<p>重于意相,而非物相,禅之悟也。</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-8 15:55:37 | 显示全部楼层
<p>三首都略改动一下,高阳台那首是戏赠,玩笑大家别当真,罪过,一不小心诳语了:)</p><p>谢谢诸位师友批评,一一问好,望多砸!</p>
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发表于 2009-10-8 19:58:56 | 显示全部楼层
第三个亦不错啊。
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发表于 2009-10-4 23:51:30 | 显示全部楼层
皆好,姣月一贯词风!
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发表于 2009-10-4 23:52:10 | 显示全部楼层
<p>尤赏两长调!</p><p>把小衲写得一代高僧似的,文人之笔不可轻信,洵然[em01]</p>
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发表于 2009-10-5 06:46:17 | 显示全部楼层
<font size="5">招手斜阳,茗边与话萧闲。句则佳矣,奈非妙龄所宜。</font>
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发表于 2009-10-5 17:30:29 | 显示全部楼层
学习皎月填词,仲秋问候!
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发表于 2009-10-5 17:43:43 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏好词,问好皎月,“<font size="5">赠殊熠”,白莲怎么说自己啊 </font>[em01]
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发表于 2009-10-5 22:55:21 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>云楼月</i>在2009-10-5 17:43:43的发言:</b><br/>欣赏好词,问好皎月,“<font size="5">赠殊熠”,白莲怎么说自己啊 </font>[em01]</div><p>我晕,小衲是老衲称呼殊熠的,比如老衲称你侄女也是称自己么?老衲之看经书只图遮遮眼,附庸附庸,不敢望成果哈。[em01]</p>
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