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[原创]夏夜思故乡

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发表于 2009-10-9 10:59:41 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd;"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;">(在故乡,夏夜常卧楼顶,半夜飘雨又止。)<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">我爱梓塘村</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">悠然四体申</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">风高星邃密</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">蛙噪夜深沉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">忽起天边雨</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">还归梦里春</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">雄鸡犹未唱</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><font face="Times New Roman">
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发表于 2009-10-9 11:10:53 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎新朋友!
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发表于 2009-10-9 11:40:49 | 显示全部楼层
首联两句隔的太远
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发表于 2009-10-9 11:42:30 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎。申字有点情况。
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发表于 2009-10-9 11:45:53 | 显示全部楼层
也当是伸&nbsp; 非此字也&nbsp; 整句油味太重 况不搭前语
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-10 10:41:51 | 显示全部楼层
呵呵
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发表于 2009-10-10 12:06:08 | 显示全部楼层
欢迎诗友!
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发表于 2009-10-10 16:17:15 | 显示全部楼层
<font color="#ee1111">申</font>通<font color="#09c7f7">伸</font>,班超《北征赋》:行止屈<span class="highlight"><font color="#c60a00">申</font></span><span class="enfont"><font face="Arial">,</font></span>与时息兮。
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发表于 2009-10-10 16:45:19 | 显示全部楼层
<p>嗯&nbsp; 申通伸&nbsp; 信通伸&nbsp;&nbsp; 寤通牾&nbsp;&nbsp; 畔通叛&nbsp; 背通倍&nbsp;&nbsp; ……可多了&nbsp; 是否今天斜视作文都可以通下去呢</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-10 17:38:42 | 显示全部楼层
<p>都是方家</p><p>一眼间症结</p>
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