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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 1cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span><font size="4">夏日聽蟬<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">火雲灼林梢，匝地炎威烈。鳴蟬自相應，流響轉清切。動葉或斷續，吟風無少歇。杳渺停虛空，餘引韻未絕。爾來廢黃鐘，桐絲間幽咽。感此憂愁端，徒勞費騷屑。不若涵素心，向晚嘶清月。<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.35pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"><p><font size="4">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 1cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span><font size="4">己丑長夏送啃軒先生之滇<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">霞觴舉罷自騰驂<span style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;">，人境幽奇何處探。</span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4"><span style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;">莫道湖山無美景，飛歌直度彩雲南。</span><p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"><p><font size="4">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 1cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span><font size="4">己丑立秋書感<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">青鸞馱夢過錢塘，傳語天涯各一方。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">不為相思總難寄，相思雲水兩茫茫。<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 1cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;"><p><font size="4">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 1cm; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96;"><span><font size="4">滿江紅<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>二十周年同學會感懷<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">回首當年，征帆送、歸程倦客。楊柳岸、鴻飛片羽，雲流寒碧。投閣書生腸已斷，焚坑事業情何極。算明朝岐路到天涯，悲歌息。<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>鷗盟會，今更昔。兒女淚，休重滴。把離杯來浣，心頭鬱積。<span style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;">扶醉且忘桑海變 ，言歡直任雞窗白。</span>趁江樓風外竹瀟瀟，聽秋笛。<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;"><p><font size="4">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span><font size="4">己丑新秋大學同窗作廿載之會<personname wst="on" productid="葉">葉</personname>君和陽羈於公務未克與會因以此寄<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">宦海浮身不自由，悶懷無奈又新秋。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">平江雲壓芳洲暗，錦水波含翠筱幽。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">卻把鷗盟沉夢底，獨將緣分憶從頭。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">何當用拙存吾道，飽食三餐作遠遊。<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4"><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span><font size="4">盥誦南邨詩詞集寄<personname wst="on" productid="趙家怡">趙家怡</personname>先生<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">詩翁卜宅近南邨，為愛籬邊松菊存。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">雲本無心游世界，月常有意到蓬門。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">吟風應覺壺天小，鳴珮翻教德業尊。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">圭臬一編行海内，瑤台黃屋復何論！<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span><font size="4"><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;"><font size="4">南越文王墓<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">先朝帝力竟難憑，和輯空教百越興。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">再度藩臣歸漢室，何時玉璽葬山陵。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">墓藏珮組魂無副，枕倚鐘鳴夢不能。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">一抔象岡坡下土，滄桑唯與暮煙凝。<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;"><p><font size="4">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span><font size="4">番禺蓮花山<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">山為蓮台化，長得大士祐<span style="LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;">。孽龍莫敢出，粵海恒廣袤。寶相矗峰巔，異景爭結構。曲徑百廻轉，靈府在左右。嵯峨棲燕岩，玲瓏吐雲岫。負勢橫虛空，攀緣絕猿狖。始覺路轉迷，忽然相通透。蓮睡澄潭中，魚戲水波皺。俄至飛鷹崖，觀覽愈完富。回瞰萬壑深，柱筍競險秀。千載採石場，巨跡悉難究。斧鑿留其痕，天然相馳驟。我來賦遊仙，丹霞滿衣袖。</span><p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 26.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: -0.3pt;"><p><font size="4">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.5pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; mso-char-indent-count: 1.97;"><span><font size="4">己丑中秋雨霽月出次韻疏影<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">月隱尊前桂子秋，半為無奈半為羞。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span><font size="4">涼飆吹斷霾天雨，中夜垂輝到小樓。<p></p></font></span></p>

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<p>紫藤姐评雅正大方四字极妥。</p><p>个人最爱《<span><font size="4">夏日聽蟬<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;》，感此憂愁端，徒勞費騷屑。不若涵素心，向晚嘶清月。最见襟抱。</span></font></span></p><p>三绝句当中以最后一绝最好。前二首第三句的“莫道”“不为”，终究不如第三绝句的转来得自然妥贴不着痕迹。</p>

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