秋日偶成

雁客

<span class="postbody">秋風未起葉先飛,騷客無愁也作詩。文墨早將匡岳染，揮毫如鐡筆粘池。</span><span class="gensmall"></span>

雁客

<p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">略改：</font></span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times New Roman'; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">秋風未起葉先飛，騷客無愁也作詩。古墨早將匡嶽染，有心只歎不逢時。</font></span></p><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->

一得愚生

<p>起句甚好</p>

雁客

<p>无</p>

东华人氏

改得好，好诗不厌千回改，学习！

雁客

<p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">秋风未起叶先飞，</span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">忝列台阶也作诗</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">。</span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">云上五峰多变幻，</span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">江流九派更迷离。</span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">三千年仰匡君秀，</span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">百万首吟庐岳奇！</span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">自古圣贤皆寂寞</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">，</span></p><p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; BACKGROUND: rgb(255,255,255); COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes';">涂鸦莫叹不逢时。</span></p><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><br/><br/>