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杨青青

<font face="Verdana" size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;七律 次韵韩翃《送客水路归陕》<br/><br/></font><font size="3"><font face="Verdana">&nbsp; &nbsp;愁入琴丝心雨斜，忍看秋尽韵难赊。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;小窗梦醒随风影，楼外月来临水家。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;断雁犹传今日信，枯肠莫忆旧时花。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;天涯休叹芳菲远，聚散浑如指上沙。</font><br/><br/><font face="Verdana">&nbsp; &nbsp;七律 次韵郁达夫</font><br/><font face="Verdana"></font><br/></font><font face="Verdana" size="3">&nbsp; &nbsp;难从小径辨东西，雪野茫茫一色齐。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;满目晶莹拂乱绪，半轮寂寞锁长堤。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;风抟袖底三冬冷，灯幻高楼尽夜迷。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;算有梅花清到骨，怅然岁岁化新泥。</font>

云楼月

<p>欣赏 二结都好[em23][em23][em23][em27]</p>

仰斋

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>杨青青</i>在2009-12-8 15:13:31的发言：</b><br/><font face="Verdana" size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;七律 次韵韩翃《送客水路归陕》<br/><br/></font><font size="3"><font face="Verdana">&nbsp; &nbsp;愁入琴丝心雨斜，忍看秋尽韵难赊。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;小窗梦醒随风影，楼外月来临水家。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;断雁犹传今日信，枯肠莫忆旧时花。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;天涯休叹芳菲远，聚散浑如指上沙。</font><br/><br/><font face="Verdana">&nbsp; &nbsp;七律 次韵郁达夫</font><br/><font face="Verdana"></font><br/></font><font face="Verdana" size="3">&nbsp; &nbsp;难从小径辨东西，雪野茫茫一色齐。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;满目晶莹拂乱绪，半轮寂寞锁长堤。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;风抟袖底三冬冷，灯幻高楼尽夜迷。<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;算有梅花清到骨，怅然岁岁化新泥。</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">郁达夫：日暮归舟中口占再叠前韵</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">归舟遥指石桥西，渔火空江一字齐。</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">苹末风寒多刺骨，林梢烟淡半笼堤。</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">玉楼歌舞人初醉，曲岸牛羊路欲迷。</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">向晚独寻孤店宿，青衫灯下涤春泥。</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 1915年作于日本</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">韩翃那首网上有，已用全唐诗校，无误，不录。</font></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><font face="Verdana" size="3">不知楼主为何次其韵。</font></div><p></p>

向闲

欢迎新朋友！

杨青青

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>云楼月</i>在2009-12-8 20:32:16的发言：</b><br/><p>欣赏 二结都好[em23][em23][em23][em27]</p></div><p></p>谢月版垂顾，问您好！

杨青青

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>仰斋</i>在2009-12-9 0:21:48的发言：</b><br/><p></p></div><p>谢仰老帖来原玉，是应诗友次韵唱和而已，您多指点！</p>

杨青青

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>向闲</i>在2009-12-9 8:37:21的发言：</b><br/>欢迎新朋友！</div><p></p>谢向版！