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发表于 2009-12-13 12:00:15 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="p0" style="ADDING-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0.75pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt; PADDING-LEFT: 0pt; PADDING-RIGHT: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 1pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">落缤纷夹雨,遍地散金鎏。错叶绣如毯,轻行不忍蹂。朔风梳并剪,嫩出却生忧。冬至即将至,是春还是秋?</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span></p><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->
发表于 2009-12-13 12:08:16 | 显示全部楼层
<p>首句是什么句法?</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-12-13 16:06:46 | 显示全部楼层
<p>自拟句法,能读能解即不违法也。</p><p>另自改如下:</p><p class="p0" style="ADDING-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0.75pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt; PADDING-LEFT: 0pt; PADDING-RIGHT: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 1pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体"></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体"><p class="p0" style="ADDING-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0.75pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt; PADDING-LEFT: 0pt; PADDING-RIGHT: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 1pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">落缤纷夹雨,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">黄满苑绸缪</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">。</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span></p><p class="p0" style="ADDING-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0.75pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt; PADDING-LEFT: 0pt; PADDING-RIGHT: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 1pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">曲径如图案</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">,轻盈不忍蹂。</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span></p><p class="p0" style="ADDING-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0.75pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt; PADDING-LEFT: 0pt; PADDING-RIGHT: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 1pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">朔风停剃</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">剪,新嫩却生忧。</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span></p><p class="p0" style="ADDING-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0.75pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt; PADDING-LEFT: 0pt; PADDING-RIGHT: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 1pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体">冬至即将至,是春还是秋?</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span></p><p class="p0" style="ADDING-BOTTOM: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0.75pt; MARGIN-TOP: 5pt; PADDING-LEFT: 0pt; PADDING-RIGHT: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 5pt; BORDER-TOP: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 1pt;"><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><p></p></span><p></p><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-spacerun: 'yes';"><font face="宋体"></font></span></p></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; 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