春日几首

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<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">暮歸</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">郊原畫圖裏，勝賞佇橫阡。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">流水輕輕浪，孤村淡淡煙。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">風過麥苗秀，蝶戀菜花妍。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">雞鴨思宿處，群歸如凱旋。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">以詩代柬邀啃軒先生滴水巖賞桃花 </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">三月桃花水，春山秀色多。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">雲巖騰瑞靄，芳樹列瓊柯。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">林下衣冠聚，湖邊氣象和。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">重來同勝賞，歡會意如何？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">送</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">别</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">襟弟</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">春水綠波漲，桃霞漸次紅。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">離人傷遠道，別緒怨光風。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">念念青襟短，淒淒白屋窮。</span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW">他鄉行役去，雲影落飄蓬。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">
                                        <p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font face="宋体"><font size="4"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">春夢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">四序春居首，群芳孰爲先？</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">花開人老後，夢醒不知年。</font></span></p>

红叶

<p>工稳，中间几联更见功力。</p><p>俺这几天也在琢磨一组春日，就是出不来：（</p>

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谢红叶兄清赏,还请多指谬.

鄱湖渔歌

<p>见功力!</p>

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<p>谢渔歌兄谬赏!<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold;"><p></p></span><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 22.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><strong><font face="宋体"></font></strong></span></p></p>

苍篁

<p><font size="4">斋主功底深厚，拜读，学习。</font></p><p><font size="4">谨步原玉四首，以续华貂（另发），望不吝赐评。</font></p>

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苍篁先生对拙诗总是谬赞,令愚赧然无地矣.

仰斋

最喜暮规，着笔轻，风色美。

菜人

谓群鸭归如凯旋，有意思，语新。

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<p>谢仰翁鼓励!</p><p>谢菜人兄谬赏！</p>