步古诗十九首韵(二首）

临川沐风

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: %; mso-hansi-font-family: %; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">粼粼白玉光，绵绵黄金柳。春色满城铺，谁人当户牖？</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: %; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: %; mso-hansi-font-family: %; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">中有二八女，对屏正挥手。阻隔虽千里，不似愁思妇。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: %; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: %; mso-hansi-font-family: %; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">网络一线牵，相恋两头守。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: %; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></p><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: %; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><div><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">遥遥家山远，盈盈乡野女。烨烨华灯下，宵宵弄机杼。</span><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">勤勤不得闲，零零汗如雨。莫为言苦辛，其间欣几许。</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: #393939; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">以此慰高堂，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">太仓公何语？</span></div></span>

风之歌

<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US" style="font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(57, 57, 57);"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(57, 57, 57); font-family: 宋体;">这样步韵，倒是别致。看第二首，前一对叠字用得尚好，后两句接着用就不太好了。另外织机所在，用华灯显然不宜；“霄”当为“宵”之键误。<br/></span></span>

江湖小李

我常以为古诗十九首是近体之源！

临川沐风

能如此指教，是我之幸，一并感激！