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金水

有力度

金水

有力度

卷葹

<p>好诗！</p><p>乎字径用呼，辞意更顺。不用反问，而作意自见。</p>

浔阳倦客

<p>跟贴一首99年打的油附骥助兴^_^<br/></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">雨中游井冈山<br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4"></font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font size="4">雾压千峰雨打松，朱毛陈迹渐朦胧。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="4">漫山国共男儿血，浇出鹃花一样红。</font></span></p>

鄱湖渔歌

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>卷葹</i>在2007-5-8 10:52:20的发言：</b><br/><p>好诗！</p><p>乎字径用呼，辞意更顺。不用反问，而作意自见。</p></div><p>谢段老师点评赐字，谢诸位吟长指导，已改。</p>

向闲

井冈山的诗要写出新意挺难的，渔歌与倦客的都有创意，学习！