苏幕遮

方知秋

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">苏幕遮</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">雨声中，花架底。夜也无声，点滴檐前碎。静里沉沉心自细。独立多时，眼蓄多情泪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">骨清寒，天薄醉。落了酴醿，不比人憔悴。灯影红墙摇似坠。碧水凉烟，寂寞相思里。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p>

向闲

<p>前面都好。但到“碧水凉烟”，因为因为已有雨有花有灯影红墙，再说就堆砌了。</p><p></p>

卷葹

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">雨声中，花架底。夜也无声，点滴檐前碎</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">落了酴醿，不比人憔悴——</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">天生词句。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">惟“眼蓄多情泪”较弱。多情二字多馀。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';"></span></p>

方知秋

相思泪也不好。待想想是什么泪。嘻嘻。