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水龍吟 與江右諸師友登豐城玉華山, 拈《山鬼》若有人兮披蘿帶荔句意分韻得荔字

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发表于 2007-6-21 02:51:19 | 显示全部楼层
<p>偶套用今晚QQ里江右名鼠的口气说一句:后生可畏.呵:)</p><p>学习,再翻上去</p>
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发表于 2007-6-21 10:08:47 | 显示全部楼层
又咏出一番新面目!江右才俊,令人羡煞!
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-6-21 14:32:55 | 显示全部楼层
<p>遵熊社意改一稿.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm -88.6pt 0pt 0cm; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; tab-stops: 168.75pt; mso-para-margin-right: -8.44gd;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">千年劍氣消沈</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-fareast-font-family: PMingLiU; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">,</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">奇峰吞吐無餘滓。危崖罅石,泉根冷浸,塵心頓洗。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm -88.6pt 0pt 0cm; WORD-BREAK: break-all; tab-stops: 168.75pt; mso-para-margin-right: -8.44gd;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">倦鳥鳴條,疏煙掛澗,微風天際。正東南嘉客,雲間賓主,同欲伴、星辰睡。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm -88.6pt 0pt 0cm; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; tab-stops: 168.75pt; mso-para-margin-right: -8.44gd;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">應有窺人山魅。整裙裳、藤蘿薜荔。鼓蛙似唱,愁猿來聽,涼侵衣袂。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; MARGIN: 0cm -88.6pt 0pt 0cm; WORD-BREAK: break-all; tab-stops: 168.75pt; mso-para-margin-right: -8.44gd;"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: PMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">光焰文章,歌吹終古,百憂如廢。待明朝卻下,清溪買棹,向江湖逝。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p>谢过诸位师友.每读熊社评贴,必有收获.</p><p>另复一得兄:以前也写过几阕,不敢现丑.</p>
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