学填小令二首

无稽斋主

<p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;"><font face="宋体">蟄堪先生命賦鷓鴣天成此時近生辰也</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><font face="宋体"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">六月廿</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">五</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;"><font face="宋体">此日無心念故家，生辰欲近只悲嗟。慈雲已去三千里，獨鶴猶啼兩岸葭。</font></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt;">
                        </span><font face="宋体"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">離別後，想望賒，萋萋墓草夕陽斜。柳枝折得柔腸斷，一樣流光送物華。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><font size="3">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 28.9pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 14.45pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;"><font face="宋体">浣溪沙</font></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">
                        </span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;"><font face="宋体">江樓聚飲</font></span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">
                        </span><font face="宋体"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">六月廿</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">六</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">日</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><p></p></span></font></font></p><p class="MsoBodyText" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="宋体">九曲回欄護閣樓，一窗雲影意悠悠。斜輝入照美人頭。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span><font face="宋体">狼藉杯盤渾忘我，炎涼世事不勝憂。醉時莫問醒時愁。</font><p></p></span></font></p>

一得愚生

略近詩

无稽斋主

谢一得兄

诗心云意

<p>喜第一首。“慈雲已去三千里，獨鶴猶啼兩岸葭。”“萋萋墓草夕陽斜。”“柳枝折得柔腸斷，一樣流光送物華。”都是好句子！</p><p>第二首中“斜輝入照美人頭”和“<span><font face="宋体">狼藉杯盤”似不谐。“<span><font face="宋体">狼藉杯盤”伤雅。</font></span></font></span></p><p><span><font face="宋体"><span>诗心妄评，或有错误，望海涵。</span></font></span></p>

无稽斋主

谢诗心赏评,“斜輝入照美人頭”,座中有美眉也.。“<span><font face="宋体">狼藉杯盤”伤雅,我意却不然,</font></span>东坡&lt;赤壁赋&gt;云:"客喜而笑，洗盞更酌， 肴核既盡， 杯盤狼藉。 相與枕藉乎舟中， 不知東方之既白。"未见不雅也.

湘东诗苑

一得先生指的是句读还是意趣。