也交作业哦(2007/01)

白云飞

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">没交之前，先来几句自白：</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 近几月没动过笔，都玩去了，偶在这里先检讨一下。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">06</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年也没写过几首，没有东西上交。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">同志们，我错了</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">…..</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这两天读了师姐们写的，偶实在是狠渐愧的说。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">好作品太多了，选几首说说：</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">①萍</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">2004/07<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">碎撒池塘点点愁，为谁行迹暂淹留？</span><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">一生苦作飘零计，胜却人间不自由。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">我最喜欢后面两句：“一生苦作飘零计，胜却人间不自由。”视角独特出新，娇弱的雪师姐时有惊人之句。本来萍踪不定是凄苦的，可是，与得不到自由相比，这又算得了什么呢？可谓苦中求乐。我觉得这两句诗可以作为与困境相抗争的佳句传唱哦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">!<p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">②</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">
                        </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">风师姐的两首无题，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">三、四句都很好</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">：“</span><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">逆旅难堪风雨夜，梦中俱是故乡人</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">。”“</span><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">一点归心和短梦，觉来何处是家乡。</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">”</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">想必风师姐是远行在外时写的，写旅人的思归之情很到位。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">③</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">
                        </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">烟花</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">长空流火烟如画</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">,</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">却道无枝花自开</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">.</span><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">片语随风寄星月，只争一刻莫相猜。</span></p><p class="MsoBodyTextIndent" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 依然是后面两句，我觉得贼好。由眼前景联想到世间情，美好的时光往往转瞬即逝，“莫相猜”难，又很可贵。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">④</span><font face="Times New Roman">
                        </font><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">斜倚竹栏听细浪，小炉慢火煮乌龙；笑谈山海汤初沸，浅啜茶盅香渐浓；</span><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">碎叶沉浮形不变</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">,</span><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">人生起落态从容；口中滋味休相问</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">,</span><span style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">甘苦从来各不同。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">首联不押又不对仗，是小师姐的一贯风格，呵呵。三、四联是全首的点睛之笔。从看到茶叶的浮沉联想到人生的起起落落，好一个“自从容”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">! </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">从中可见诗者达观的人生态度</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">(</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">小师姐年纪轻轻的写得出此种句子来让偶大吃一惊</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">)</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">。自问不能超脱如此，但愿以此为勉矣</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">!</span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 结尾：偶习惯了断章取义，上面的有点象读后感，你们可别笑哦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">!</span></p></span>

素心若雪

<p>777～～云飞真乖，写得挺好，本来这个就是自己想说什么就说什么的（反正我就是这么理解的）</p><p>S.看来师父的法西斯政策还真有点吓人哪～～</p>

小小

<p>云飞的作业做的不错啊......本来这就是自己说自己的，,写诗角度不一样，解诗的角度也不一样嘛...</p><p>嘿嘿,啥时弄个几首来看看。.</p>[em01]

皎月

云飞也交了，好象只剩下我了[em04]

白云飞

<p>遵师父命令，补-------</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">⑤木兰花＜七夕＞<span lang="EN-US">---</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">绿杨<span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black;"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">天河每作倾盆雨，试问于今深几许。渐行月是水中舟飘泊云如苇上絮 漫猜灵鹊铺桥去 拟个话儿捎那处 </span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">千年相守又何如？屈指无非朝与暮 <span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: blue;"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">=======</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">词我不太懂，不过，感觉这两句好“千年相守又何如？屈指无非朝与暮”，在同题诗词中，这种写法还比较新。所谓“两情若是长久时，岂在朝朝暮暮。”大概就是这意思。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">⑥街头乞儿<span lang="EN-US">---</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">皎月<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">路头倦卧面无神，百结污衫怎蔽身？破钵难招青眼客，长街空过锦衣人。已无餐饭赊明日，独有西风拭泪痕。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">天不回春苏冻骨，尘寰何处可安贫？<span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: blue;"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">=======小</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">月好作品太多，只能拣简单的说说，“独有西风拭泪痕”想象一下风来拭泪，很有意思晒；“天不回春苏冻骨，尘寰何处可安贫？” 关注现实社会的底层人生，有老杜“安得广厦千万间<span lang="EN-US">…”的襟怀，最后一问也很有震撼力。值得偶多多地学习~<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">⑦七律 晨接友短信有感<span lang="EN-US">---子佩<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">心海无端涌浪潮，经年只恐意难消。白云曾向山间住，红药空余眼底娇。几处清风添怅惘，谁家浊酒慰孤寥。此生每若浮萍散，欲说重逢路正遥。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">=======比较偏爱这首，多少人生感悟在其中。偶还不识格律的时候，子佩就是中诗的名人啦，偶学习学习再学习~<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">⑧秋<span lang="EN-US">---晓枫<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">余晖携雁影，径草起虫鸣。深院风回处，箫然听叶声。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">=======比较喜欢这首，处处是秋声。期待师兄以后多来啊~<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">⑨人生感怀<span lang="EN-US">---寻梦<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">人生不过逆行舟，破浪扬帆竞上游。若到源头搁浅石，停云听水亦无愁。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">=======这首好，能有此悟，不简单晒，人若真能如此，自是不凡。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.0pt;">⑩闻友人潭石退居二线而作<span lang="EN-US">---唐唐</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">今上岚峰乐似仙，青山为尔换红衫。悄声寄语南归雁，莫把行踪露外边。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">=======这是师兄作品中较特别的一首，抛开了他一贯的写风格。显得俏皮、清新可人。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">11、哭月<span lang="EN-US">---秋红<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt;">西窗孤月照，户内瘦人痴。本是团圆日，<span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;阴阳两不知。<p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">=======没有华丽词澡，以情胜。用真挚的情感写出来都是好的。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">&nbsp;<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">嘿嘿，好象说完了耶</span></p><p></p>