秋夜长

华仔

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">秋夜长，秋风凉。月清光，露为霜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">垂手栏杆，落叶飞黄。层楼肃立，街火昏黄。遐思江表，极目鄱阳。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">山辽辽兮景茫茫，水漫漫兮葭苍苍。凯风易兮雁南翔，芙蓉摧兮金菊芳。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">思远人兮天一方，时已迈兮谁复捣衣裳。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">无捣衣，心益伤。心益伤，泪飞扬。新知难为喜，旧恩故难忘。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">江干解佩神妃渺，巫山云雨梦彷徨。梦彷徨，郁中肠。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><br/></span><span style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">秋夜长，秋风凉。月清光，露为霜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: #393939; LINE-HEIGHT: 120%; FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><p></p></span></p>

东华人氏

<p>流畅，但遣词造句有堆砌感。</p>

剑尘

同感．