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代发裴智清平乐四首

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发表于 2008-1-15 13:21:07 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 清平乐·偶题</p><p>歪梨蔫枣,暗恋枝头老。莫怪时人呼傻冒,白眼投来当宝。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 向来食少杯盘,那还计较甜酸。尽管风嘲雨讪,摘来权作三餐。</p><p>红尘俗债,岁月仍需贷。独自裁笺成一快,便得超然屋外。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 任凭老去荒丘,耕耘依旧黄牛。何处令看眼色,颈僵难以低头。</p><p>敢言无恙,触处心花放。草木返青春在望,岂阻百灵歌唱。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 怡神笔砚诗书。不愁四壁空虚。纵遇灾星数载,昔沽余勇能无。</p><p>丛林尽染,眉黛秋山远。天际乱鸦归去晚,聚散林中呼唤。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 沉思久倚楼头,星河牢系双眸。结得深情何处?海天一叶吟舟。</p><p></p><p></p><p>&nbsp; </p>
发表于 2008-1-15 13:42:47 | 显示全部楼层
<p>裴先生好词^_^</p><p>俗语入词偶出奇</p>
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发表于 2008-1-15 14:27:52 | 显示全部楼层
活脱,喜欢,让我想起湖南伍锡学。
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发表于 2008-1-15 15:40:43 | 显示全部楼层
<p>趣味中还有寓意。</p><p>“何处令看眼色,颈僵难以低头。”这句老倦应该因为知音啊</p>
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发表于 2008-1-15 16:01:26 | 显示全部楼层
<p>四首各具意趣,学习~~~~~</p>
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发表于 2008-1-15 16:47:39 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>红叶</i>在2008-1-15 15:40:43的发言:</b><br/><p>趣味中还有寓意。</p><p>“何处令看眼色,颈僵难以低头。”这句老倦应该因为知音啊</p></div><p>呵呵倒是</p>
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发表于 2008-1-15 17:10:34 | 显示全部楼层
<p>饶有别趣,欣赏!"便得超然屋外",此处是否笔误?启功先生亦喜新语俗语入词,转贴一组:</p><p>&nbsp;<b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">乘客纷纷一字排,巴头控脑费疑猜。东西南北车多少,不靠咱们这站台。坐不上,我活该,愿知究竟几时来。有人说得真精确,零点之前总会开。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;<b>&nbsp; </b></span><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">远见车来一串连,从头至尾距离宽。车门无数齐开闭,百米飞奔去复还。原地站,靠标竿,手招口喊嗓音干。司机心似车门铁,手把轮盘眼望天。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<b>
                        </b></span><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">这次车来更可愁,窗中人比站前稠。阶梯一露刚伸脚,门扇双关已碰头。长叹息,小勾留,他车未卜此车休。明朝誓练飞毛腿,纸马风轮任意游。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<b>
                        </b></span><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">铁打车箱肉做身,上班散会最艰辛。有穷弹力无穷挤,一寸空间一寸金。头屡动,手频伸,可怜无补费精神。当时我是孙行者,变个驴皮影戏人。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;<b>&nbsp; </b></span><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">挤进车门勇难当,前呼后拥甚堂皇。身成板鸭干而扁,可惜无人下箸尝。头尾嵌,四边镶,千冲万撞不曾伤。并非铁肋铜筋骨,匣晨磁瓶厚布囊。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">车站分明在路旁,车中腹背变城墙。心雄志壮钻空隙,舌敞唇焦喊借光。下不去,莫慌张,再呆两站又何妨。这回好比笼中鸟,暂作番邦杨四郎。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">入站之前挤到门,前回经验要重温。谁知背后彪形汉,直撞横冲往外奔。门有缝,脚无跟,四肢著地眼全昏。行人问我寻何物,近视先生看草根。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">鹧鸪天八首·乘公交车组词</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-ascii-font-family: ; mso-hansi-font-family: ;">昨日墙边有站牌,今朝移向哪方栽。皱眉瞪眼搜寻遍,地北天南不易猜。开步走,别徘徊。至多下站两相挨。居然到了新车站,火箭航天又一回。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: ; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Times New Roman; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-1-17 14:34:00 | 显示全部楼层
<p>代裴智一一道谢。</p><p>屋外确是物外误按,谢剑尘提醒,向裴智致歉。</p>
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