[原创]临江仙 登八镜台

胖大海

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">临江仙</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">登八镜台</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">六岸三江鱼戏水，涟漪片片孤单。北门春社又飞鸢。欲云天共远，心线被情牵。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">苏子挥毫题八镜，而今我独凭栏。轻舟棹过小台前。青芜浮暗柳，愁絮锁眉弯。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></p>

草啸

<p>片片，就不孤单了吧？后面的独，似复。</p>

水击三千

<p>又一春情勃发之人来了哈，，，</p>[em01]

浔阳倦客

<p>欲云存疑</p><p>轻舟棹重复了吧</p>

胖大海

<p>回各位~</p><p>孤单处确实没想到更好的词`</p><p>欲云处:风筝想飞到高空~</p><p>棹:名词动用`</p><p>问好~酒~</p>[em10][em10][em10][em10]

风露中宵

轻舟棹过，棹作吹如何？