荒村静夜

水击三千

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">霁夜荒村寂，春山淡月闲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">星垂缥缈处，人在有无间。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">露下兰风嫋，空庭苔影斑。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">泠泉未洗耳，云外响灵顽。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p></span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span>

一得愚生

远 缥缈 邈 殊近

胖大海

<p>奇静,可听针尖声~~</p>

水击三千

先谢二兄，接受意见，改几字，

草啸

<p>感觉有些空泛。三联弱。</p>

江湖小李

空灵！然，除末尾一句响了一声雷外，整个似乎更类秋山而非春山！春山是热闹为主，如视觉之红绿，如听觉悟之鸟语，如雷鸣！

水击三千

<p>再谢哈,,,山字有犯韵,再改下,</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">寂寂春山夜，村荒淡月闲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">星垂缥缈处，人在有无间。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">露下兰风嫋，空庭竹影斑。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">泠泉未洗耳，云外响灵顽。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p>