暮春漫兴

浔阳倦客 · 发表于 2008-4-16 11:43:57

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">暮春漫兴<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">水色天光半晦明，南山高与暮云平。<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">春寒不似冬寒冽，院草犹如野草生。<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">满地落花风打劫，一帘碎影月多情。<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">抬头试问南来雁，尚未归来有几成。

水击三千 · 发表于 2008-4-16 13:26:40

这首齐整好看，颈稍露，算是思过录么？

草啸 · 发表于 2008-4-16 14:11:37

这个不是思过的。俺早前就篡改过其中的一句。

剑尘 · 发表于 2008-4-16 16:05:25

这首不错，有自己特色而不失清丽[em17]偶偏喜颈联．可人ＭＭ劫花么[em01][em01][em01]

明轩居士 · 发表于 2008-4-16 16:28:28

师父这首好~~~[em01]

浔阳倦客 · 发表于 2008-4-16 17:57:19

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">谢各兄台和明轩。俺无过可思啊，要思的是那个洲际导弹^_^  威廉重了个字，改<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">暮春漫兴<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">水色天光半晦明，南山高与暮云平。<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">春寒不似冬寒冽，院草犹如野草生。<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">满地落花风打劫，一帘碎影月多情。<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:'mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">抬头试问南来雁，未踏征途有几成。

江湖小李 · 发表于 2008-4-16 23:31:06

化而无痕，浔阳兄又进了！

梅云 · 发表于 2008-4-16 23:51:33

次句化用小杜“南山与秋色，气势两相高”与梦窗“秋与云平”，以反衬暮春之寒，结合首句“半晦明”，令人兴“东风临夜冷于秋”之慨叹。

浔阳倦客 · 发表于 2008-4-17 01:03:05

谢小李谢社长电瓶^_^倦客却不知小杜句，社长提起倒是想起了那个秋与云平却记不得是梦窗的^_^

江湖小李 · 发表于 2008-4-17 08:23:19

所以我说浔阳兄化而无痕，连自己都记不得来处了，当然就化了嘛！<img alt="" src="http://fx.ncdxfz.com/jiangyouss/Skins/default/topicface/face5.gif"/>

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