答皎月 （二首）

风露中宵

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">月下蒹葭花外影，燈前宿墨鏡中塵。<span lang="EN-US">
                                <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">枕空海北三刀夢，誰寄江南一剪春？<span lang="EN-US">
                        </span></span></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">漢上思追仙鶴影，雲間聽落玉箏塵。<span lang="EN-US">
                                                <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">難期海浪通江夢，轉念江潮度海春。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">皆佳联也。学习。</span></p></span></span>

燕山燕

<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">多谢东华、剑尘、风露诸兄，问安。</span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">再谢小月，君之“未知燕北天涯夢，可接江南鶴背春？”问得通透千里，海荡云飞，余两首未抵君此一句也！</span></p>

颖庐

<p>唱和俱佳，中二联皆重锤炼，渐积工力。</p><p>皎月尾联稍嫌草率。</p>

燕山燕

谢段先生评，恳请多多斧正。问安。