习作

江湖小李

<p>皎月兄去了云南，幸好回来得快，昨天犬子来短信，昆明震感强烈，初不知震源，只得集于空旷处！</p>

红叶

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><font face="宋体">仔细看了一下，大为欣赏，同简素，最赏下面这个：</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><font face="宋体">山欲起，塔思飞，海际风驮鹤梦归。</font></span><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.5pt;"><br/></span></b><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><font face="宋体">撑住南荒天一角，寺空留与白云偎。</font></span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.5pt;"><br/></span></b></p><p><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.5pt;">只是结句与皎月旧作“青山留与白云偎”如出一辙，虽都是好句，但仍是偷懒的：）</span></b></p><p><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 16.5pt;"></span></b></p>

皎月

<p>谢小李兄宅心仁厚，还得多提醒孩子当心才是。</p><p>红叶果然好记性，回锅的东西被你察觉了，好厉害：）</p>

剑尘

皎月兄一写就琳琅满目，还让不让人活啦？嫉妒得紧哈[em01]

水击三千

<p>同卢兄,</p><p>力气很足,</p>